Voyaging to Tairawhiti

Voyaging to Tairawhiti
Hi i’m captain Ebony welcome to my waka. We have lots and lots of food in our little hut like crayfish, kinda, eel, potato and more because we always have a big feast. We all have different jobs the sailsmen, fishermen and my personal favourite captain that's my job to keep this waka in shape. Night time came everyone was asleep but me to make sure we go the right way and find land. Day times back and everyone's still asleep so I had to screamed to wake them up and it always works. 

We were learning about voyaging to tairawhiti creative writing

I found it easy to spell 

I found it hard to make stuff up 

I really enjoyed how it looks 

Next time I need to use more nouns

Comments

  1. Hello Ebony, it's Amber your blog buddy from Mangonui School. I think that one of the interesting parts is that you have to scream to wake up the people that were so so so so so so tired that they couldn't wake up in the morning😴. Did you know I love potato's? they are really yum Next time you could add a photo.

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